You send me your Feature screenplay, TV Pilot or short film script in pdf format.

You let me know any specific aspect you’d like me to concentrate on - Improving Story Structure, Pacing or how to develop characters etc. Not mandatory but can help improve feedback.

I read your script and give you my honest considered notes and thoughts, concentrating on the key areas but also offering advice and even ideas and examples of how you might get more out of your story and character conflict.

You read my notes and then full of confidence and enthusiasm you tackle that next draft.

You win several awards and become the world’s most respected Screenwriter… Maybe?

*I cannot guarantee my notes will lead to any awards wins or a growth in status within the industry. Sorry